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photoshop. Great hair as usual, smoother than previous CC wall before. Well improved, but something disturb is light
source..i'm too aware with lightning condition. There's two main light source:
1. fairy on left side and headphone of right side. Try to adding soft glowing dim around fairy (better with manual brush
with low opacity, not layer style instead) and her hair must be softened by the fairy dim light.
2. headphone on the left. looks shine brighter..errr are u using something like 'lens flare'? I think it's better with
bright glow only. Some area highlighted correctly by headphone's bright, but some area not. Example breast on the right
side.
Star brush on fairy : OK, star brush around headphone : NO, too large in size and star shape looks very 'photoshop
default'. Try to customize your brush, play with scattered, shape dynamics option, or just use your tablet with
random-tilting pressure surely you can obtain amazing sparkling starry brush effects with more natural look. For the
rest, i'm point to alenas comment.
Sorry going to rude enough, i'm not trying to trolling or provoke you, but at least i want make a piece ultimately
improved, so next time a astonishing result can be approach, and it's original after all and you had done promising
something original! Looking forward your next original piece, good luck!
woah thanks for the lengthy comment. :D. You are not being rude. In fact, I love these constructive comments. Keep them
coming please :)
nothing can get past your eyes I guess :D. yeah I used lens flare as the base for the light before smudge and some
blendings. I did try to pay attention to the lighting, I guess i made a mistake at some places. (I just noticed the
light on the right breast is supposed to be at the top, hope you get what I meant :P).
For the stars, I'm not used to the random scatter option. I actually place them one by one. Now that I look at them, I
do admit they looked too big and stands out too much :D.
Thanks for the comment. 'll try to improve more next time :))